bpo-18280: Make documentation less personal.#21639
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I'm sorry, but this is a much more substantive rewrite than I would like to see, and introduces several errors. I don't have the stomach to guide you through further revisions. I'm closing this.
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This is an example of how I would continue through the documentation.
Note: One element I also address is sentences (especially paragraphs) beginning with "It is ...". IMHO it is much clearer documentation when "it" is specified rather than assumed.
https://bugs.python.org/issue18280